Expressing Opinion in a Letter

Think of a TV show that you do not like. Write a letter to express your opinion. Give reasons and sugsestions...

                                                                                                                   Bekasi, December 7 2011

Director of RCTI

Jl. Raya Perjuangan No. 1, Kebon Jeruk,
Jakarta 11530

Dear Sir/Madam

     My name is Nalar Mutiara Esa and I'm 16 years old. As a regular viewer of your Tv programs Iwould like to comment on your program music Dahsyat which is aired from 9 am  to 11 am everyday.

     In my opinion the music program is an awkward. First of all, The presenter of this program uses too much local slang and over walming. Secondly, the viewer in studio like villagers, their are not good looking. The worst of all the program has wrong air time, it should be aired everyday, maybe its better aired on weekend.

    The music program is definitely awkward and boring. You should make it more interesting and the presnter... They should use standard language and don't over walming again.

    Thank you very muvh for your attention and cooperation.

Sincerely,

mutiaraesa